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This little exchange made me laugh:

“Your friend is asleep. Arrived on the doorstep carrying you, both of you looking like dead men.”

“Dead men don’t walk.”

The old man was still staring sharply at Colton. “I wouldn’t put it past them.”

Great work!

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Thank you! I had fun with this scene. 😂

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Apr 16Liked by Victoria Jensen

Interesting turn to the story!

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